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    My forgetten Love



    Love is such a wonderful feeling
    Only if I hade you by my side
    Lesten please to my heart beating
    You'll know that from your love I can't hide


    Honey;that look is full of emotions
    I can see that in your pretty eyes
    Me without you;there are no solutions
    But I'll wait and I'll count days


    I thought I'm just dreaming
    But I felt a tear coming down of my eye
    And I realized that I'm hoping
    If only you'll be mine someday


    Now you're gone,I can't stop my tears
    I tried to drow in your face,your different smiles
    I wish if I just forget my fears
    And if there's one step to get to you and not those miles


    By:Kharbocha






  • #2
    thx a lot kharbocha
    love is a such wonderful feeling
    it's right
    strasbourg

    67













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    • #3
      thanks to you for this sweet comment





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      • #4
        thank you my sister
        sigpic فطومة

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        • #5
          u're welcome darling





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          • #6
            There are some hidden skill in your poem sister ...well done
            just be careful with grammar next time
            and also one important thing is do not translate what you want from arabic to english but just think about it in english



            please accept my comment

            i like your poem
            and i really feel it







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            • #7
              thanks darling
              you're right I should pay attention to grammer as you said but i'm gonna find my self an excuse:I'm a beginner poet
              I hope that by your judgement I'll improve my skills
              thanks again for your encouragement





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              • #8
                thank you honey for the wonderful words




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                • #9
                  thanks a lot for this wonderful poem
                  i like it

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                  • #10
                    thank you so much darling
                    sigpichttp://www.anaqamaghribia.com/vb/ima...ine=1371553280

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                    • #11
                      i like your way to express your self in this wondrful poem ......good bles you sweetie

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                      • #12
                        think you sweety for your sweet expretion about love for give me if i do any mistaks cos i don-t knew english verry good




                        اللهم إني أستودعك جنيني الذي في رحمي، أنت الذي لا تضيع ودائعك يا الله

                        لا اله الا الله وحده لا شريك له له الملك وله الحمد يحيي و يميت بيده الخير وهو على كل شئ قدير
                        -من-قالها-7-مرات-كفاه-الله-همه


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                        • #13
                          المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة فتاة الأسرار مشاهدة المشاركة
                          thank you honey for the wonderful words
                          you're welcome

                          thanks a lot for u're sweet words sweety





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                          • #14
                            المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة عبير الرياحين مشاهدة المشاركة
                            thanks a lot for this wonderful poem
                            i like it

                            you're welcome darling






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                            • #15
                              المشاركة الأصلية بواسطة نادية2 مشاهدة المشاركة
                              thank you so much darling
                              thanks to you sister





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