My forgetten love...

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    My forgetten Love



    Love is such a wonderful feeling
    Only if I hade you by my side
    Lesten please to my heart beating
    You'll know that from your love I can't hide


    Honey;that look is full of emotions
    I can see that in your pretty eyes
    Me without you;there are no solutions
    But I'll wait and I'll count days


    I thought I'm just dreaming
    But I felt a tear coming down of my eye
    And I realized that I'm hoping
    If only you'll be mine someday


    Now you're gone,I can't stop my tears
    I tried to drow in your face,your different smiles
    I wish if I just forget my fears
    And if there's one step to get to you and not those miles


    By:Kharbocha






  • #2
    thx a lot kharbocha
    love is a such wonderful feeling
    it's right
    strasbourg

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    • #3
      thanks to you for this sweet comment





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      • #4
        thank you my sister
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        • #5
          u're welcome darling





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          • #6
            There are some hidden skill in your poem sister ...well done
            just be careful with grammar next time
            and also one important thing is do not translate what you want from arabic to english but just think about it in english



            please accept my comment

            i like your poem
            and i really feel it







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            • #7
              thanks darling
              you're right I should pay attention to grammer as you said but i'm gonna find my self an excuse:I'm a beginner poet
              I hope that by your judgement I'll improve my skills
              thanks again for your encouragement





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              • #8
                thank you honey for the wonderful words




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                • #9
                  thanks a lot for this wonderful poem
                  i like it

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                  • #10
                    thank you so much darling
                    sigpichttp://www.anaqamaghribia.com/vb/ima...ine=1371553280

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